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五年级上册三单元英语作文点评

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2020-06-15

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五年级上册英语单元作文

第一单元MyFavouriteTeacher

Myfavouriteteacherisourmathteacher.She'syoungandpretty.She'sverykind.Herclassissomuchfun.Wealllikeher.Doyoulikemyteacher?

第二单元MyWeek

Iam11yearsold.FromMondaytoFriday,Igotoschool.IlikeFridays.Wehaveart,music,andcomputeronFridays.heflowers,emptythetrashandsweepthefloor.Aftermeals,Icanhelpmymotherdothedishes.OnSunday,Icanwashtheclothes.Whataboutyou?Areyouhelpful,too?

【要领点评】

本篇作文的题目是“我可以帮助做家务”,作者主要叙述自己在家帮助做的事情,介绍自己的名字,所在年级及在家能做的家务,很详细,到位。写作时还要注意大小写和时态。

InTheKitchen

Thisisthekitchenofmyfamily.It’sbigandnice.Look!Mymotheriscookinginit.Thisisamicrowaveandthatisastove.Thereisabigtablehere.Therearemanythingsonit.Whatarethese?Theylookyummy!Oh,they’restrawberries.Andwhatarethose?Theyaregrapes.

【要领点评】

这篇作文的题目是“在厨房”里,作者根据自己家的厨房情况。介绍厨房里有微波炉和电炉,有一张大桌子和桌子上的物品等,以及妈妈在做饭,非常真实。

MyVillage

Myvillageisverybeautiful.Therearemanyhousesinthevillage.Nearthevillage,thereisaforest.Asmallriverisinfrontofthevillage.Thewaterinitisveryclean.Wecanseesomefishintheriver.Neartheriver,youcanseeamountain.Someflowersandgrassareonthemountain.Ilikemyvillage.Welcometomyvillage!

【要领点评】

本文以“我的村庄”为题描述了自己家乡的风景。介绍了村庄的房屋、森林、河流及大山,使人看了这篇作文后确实感觉到“我的村庄”的美丽。同学们在写作时,可仔细想一下自己的村庄或所在城市的特点,尽量使用本单元学过的单词或短语进行叙述。

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