小学英语作文及点评篇一：最新学生英文评语
Billie–Billieisaverybrightgirl，sheunderstandseverythingthatisgoingonintheclass。Sheisdoingreallywellwithallthenewwordsandsentences。Sheisalwaysputtingherhanduptopracticewhatwehavejustlearnt。
David–Davidisaverycleverlittleboy，heishappyandactiveinclassandlovestolearnnewthingsallthetime。HealwayswantstogetupandpracticehisEnglish。
Hardy–Hardyisaconfidentlittleboywithlotsofenergyandhelovestolearn。Heisputtinghishanduptopracticethenewsentenceshehasjustlearnt；heisaveryactivestudent。
Allan–Allanissuchagreatlittleboy；heisalwayshappyandeagertolearn。Helovestoplayandgetsalongreallywellwitheveryoneinclass。Hecangraspthenewwordsandsentencesreallywell。Sheryl–Sherylisareallywonderfullittlegirlandsheunderstandseverythingthatisgoingonduringtheclass，sheenjoysgettingupandpracticingwhatshehasjustlearnt。Shelovestobeinclassandlearnnewthings。
Tony–Tonyisaverybrightlittleboywhohasagoodgraspof
English，helovestolearnandisveryactiveduringtheclass。Heisoneofthefirstchildrentoputhishandupandpracticewhathehasjustlearnt。
Christina–Christinaisaconfident，lovelylittlegirltoteach。Shealwaysgetsalongreallywellinclassandenjoyslearningalot。Sheisgettingmoreandmoreactiveintheclass，whichisreallygreat。Sean–Seaniscomingalonginleapsandbounds。Heisgettingmoreinvolvedintheclass，andenjoysgettingupinfrontanddoingtheactionsandsayingthenewwords。
Mickey–Mickeyisstillasconfidentandhappyasever。Hegetsalongwithal
lthechildrenintheclassreallywellandhelovestolearnnewthings，andisaveryactivememberoftheclass。
Viola-Violaisabrightlittlegirl，sheisveryhappytobeinclassandshereallylovestolearnallthetime。Shehasagoodgraspof
everythingthatwearedoingintheclass；sheenjoyspracticingwhatshehasjustlearnt。
Jake-Jakeisaverysmartlittleboy，hehasgotagreatgraspofEnglish。Heisveryactiveintheclassandreallyenjoysgettingupinfrontoftheclassandpracticingallthenewwords，sentencesandactionsthathehasjustlearnt。
Myron-Myronseemstobegettingalongwellinclassandheenjoyspracticingthenewwordsandsentencesthathehasjustlearnt。Heisputtinghishanduptogetinfrontandsaythenewwords。
小学英语作文及点评篇二：中考英语作文范文及点评：自由作文1
【习作要求】
Writeeightormoresentencesabouttheseasonyoulikebest.
【参考范文】
Ilikewinterbest.Thoughitisverycold,itisgoodfor
skating.IoftengoskatingonSundayswithmyfather.Whenitsnows,everythingturnswhite.Treesandhousesarecoveredwiththicksnow.Howbeautifultheworldlooks!MyfriendsandIliketomakesnowmen.Sometimeswemakesnowballsandthrowthemateachother.That'saveryinterestinggame.IlikewinterholidayverymuchbecausetheSpringFestivalisthehappiesttimeoftheyear.
【名师点评】
作者用流畅的语言描述了冬天的景色。全文意思表达清楚，结构紧密。
小学英语作文及点评篇三：PEP小学英语五年级上册各单元作文范例及点评
MissTangismyEnglishteacher.She’sverypretty.Sheistallandthin.Shehastwobigeyesandasmallmouth.Herhairislong.Shelikescatsverymuch.Andshelikessinginganddancing,too.HerEnglishisverygood.WeoftenplaygamesinEnglishclasses.Sheisverykindtous.Weallloveher.
【要领点评】
这篇作文的题目是“我的英语老师”，是一篇介绍人物的作文。小作者开门见山，直接点题，首先介绍了英语老师的姓名，然后逐一介绍了她的外貌特征、喜好、英语水平、上课特点以及师生情感等。
小朋友们在写作文时，要注意使用自己最熟悉的词[组]，以免写出一些错句子。写作时要注意意思连贯、语句通顺、标点正确、书写清晰、规范等。
MyDaysoftheweek
I’mastudentandIaminGrade5.Igetupatsixo’clockeveryday.Ihavebreakfastathalfpastsix,andgotoschoolatseveno’clock.IhaveclassesfromMondaytoSaturday.IhaveanEnglishclassonFridayandIhaveaPEclassonTuesday.Idon’thavetogotoschoolonschool,andIliketogoswimmingonthatday.
【要领点评】
这篇作文的题目是“我的一周”，小作者没有说一些空话，而是从自己的亲身经历写起，叙述了自己一周七天的所作所为，并特别强调了星期天的喜好，写得自然、流畅。
小朋友们写作文时要注意人称及谓语动词的变化，要依据提示，结合自己的实际，写自己身边熟悉的事情。
MyFavouriteFood
Doyouknowwhatthisis?Guess!Itscolouris
yellow.It’slongandthin.Itlookslikeasmallboatandcrescent.Oh,itisabanana.Doyouknowwhatthatis?Guessagain!Itscolourisorange.It’sround.Itlooks
likeasmallballandasmalllantern.Oh,itisanorange.Ilikethenalot.Ilikeice-creams.Iliketochewgum.Chocolatesandcandiesareyummy.Ilikethemverymuch.
Howaboutyou?What’syourfavouritefood?
【要领点评】
MyFavouriteFood是一篇很成功的文章，小作者并不是简单地列举出自己最喜欢的每一种食物，而是有详有略地进行介绍。整篇文章用词准确、语言流畅、没有语法错误。另外，文章中出现了一些生词，可见小作者是用心查字典了。
Icanhelpdohousework
Iamagirl.MynameisLiLing.I’minClassThree,GradeFive.I’mhelpfulathome.Icanwatertheflowers,emptythetrashandsweepthefloor.Aftermeals,Icanhelpmymotherdothedishes.OnSunday,Icanwashtheclothes.Whataboutyou?Areyouhelpful,too?
【要领点评】
本篇作文的题目是“我可以帮助做家务”，作者主要叙述自己在家帮助做的事情，介绍自己的名字，所在年级及在家能做的家务，很详细，到位。
小朋友们在写作时，应尽量写一些亲自经历的事情，这样会避免在作文时显得太空，因为只有自己经常做的事情印象才会特别深刻。写作时还要注意大小写和时态。
InTheKitchen
Thisisthekitchenofmyfamily.It’sbigandnice.Look!Mymotheriscookinginit.Thisisamicrowaveandthatisastove.Thereisabigtablehere.Therearemanythingsonit.Whatarethese?Theylookyummy!Oh,they’restrawberries.Andwhatarethose?Theyaregrapes.
【要领点评】
这篇作文的题目是“在厨房”里，作者根据自己家的厨房情况。介绍厨房里有微波炉和电炉，有一张大桌子和桌子上的物品等，以及妈妈在做饭，非常真实。
小朋友们，可以从观察自己身边的事、物写起，利用所学的句子，描述身边熟悉的东西来训练习作。
MyVillage
Myvillageisverybeautiful.Therearemanyhousesinthevillage.Nearthevillage,thereisaforest.Asmallriverisinfrontofthevillage.Thewaterinitisveryclean.Wecanseesomefishintheriver.Neartheriver,youcanseeamountain.Someflowersandgrassareonthemountain.Ilikemyvillage.Welcometomyvillage!
【要领点评】
本文以“我的村庄”为题描述了自己家乡的风景。介绍了村庄的房屋、森林、河流及大山，使人看了这篇作文后确实感觉到“我的村庄”的美丽。小朋友们在写作时，可仔细想一下自己的村庄或所在城市的特点，尽量使用本单元学过的单词或短语进行叙述。